RSS

Backspace. Revise.

25 Oct

Backspace. Revise.

from my bio:
…pretending to be a domestic goddess (who does not do windows or pair socks from the laundry)…

Should now read:
pretending to be a domestic goddess (who does not do windows unless the installer’s fingerprints are all over them-or pair socks from the laundry)

Based on today, that is how I would revise myb bio. How do you approach revision?

Advertisements
 
1 Comment

Posted by on October 25, 2011 in Revising

 

Tags: , , ,

One response to “Backspace. Revise.

  1. 3by3 writing method

    October 25, 2011 at 8:31 pm

    how about – a domestic goddess in every sense of the word – magical, theatrically beautiful, freelancing as a home exec. K (does not do windows or small meaningless chores unless over compensated with enless love and affection… even then its a stretch)

     

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s